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作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 02:57 PM 標題: 問功課![幫下手]

我想各位幫手睇下我阿妹篇文

係1封信

揾錯處

Dear Uncle Seth,

   Thank you for rescuing me from the crocodile farm.

   I want to go to the Crocodilpoplis because i want to have many jewellery and i want to eat many food.

   I don't think to set off for a trip by yourself is good because the man was deceive me.When I was lock in the farm,I was very frightened because everyone look unhappy.However,when I see you,I feel happy and surpriesd!I think you are the best!

   I promise you I won't be naughty.Thank you!

Best wishes,
Sally

唔該哂!!!

[ 本帖最後由 Ruki 於 2009-6-17 03:16 PM 編輯 ]

作者: buncherry 時間: 2009-6-17 03:02 PM

你吾係英文好勁既咩?_-V-''V

只係講一向:

親愛的叔叔:

多謝你帶我去鱷魚農場...........

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 03:05 PM 標題: 回覆 #2 buncherry 的帖子

但係我啲英文好差

作者: H0! 時間: 2009-6-17 03:05 PM 標題: 回覆 #1 Ruki 的帖子

睇完要點??

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 03:06 PM

QUOTE:

原帖由 H0! 於 2009-6-17 03:05 PM 發表。

睇完要點??

揾錯處

作者: kukucat 時間: 2009-6-17 03:08 PM

只要睇就得嘛?!
真係太好啦…[我睇完啦

不過我英文唔太好，
叫我做proofread不如叫我去死- -
check grammar 呢d既大事都係留比英文好手同電腦啦XD

作者: `乜春 時間: 2009-6-17 03:11 PM

同一句講3次i want to

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 03:12 PM 標題: 回覆 #7 `乜春的帖子

What are u saying??

作者: kukucat 時間: 2009-6-17 03:14 PM 標題: 回覆 #8 Ruki 的帖子

佢唔講我都唔覺-v-
一句有3個''i want to '' -0-||

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 03:16 PM 標題: 回覆 #9 kukucat 的帖子

Oh yes!!

作者: `mR.H0 時間: 2009-6-17 03:24 PM

我望到有幾處錯

但唔肯定係唔係真係錯 (廢事我都錯埋

)

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-17 03:42 PM 標題: 回覆 #11 `mR.H0 的帖子

Tell me pls!!!!

作者: `乜囧. 時間: 2009-6-17 11:51 PM 標題: 回覆 #11 `mR.H0 的帖子

英文大王呀

作者: `乜春 時間: 2009-6-18 11:12 AM

英式寫法唔係要將個下款拍去右邊ga咩-,-?

作者: lilypolly 時間: 2009-6-18 11:26 AM

以下只係我嘅意見!

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Dear Uncle Seth,

Thank you for rescuing me from the crocodile farm. I want to go to the Crocodilpoplis(打錯字- -?) because i want to have many jewellery and i want to eat many food.

I don't think to set off for a trip by yourself is a good idea(我覺得咁樣岩d-.-) because the man was deceive me.When I was locked(past tense [掛] -,=) in the farm,I had been frightened (呢個[看似]岩d) because everyone look unhappy.However,when I saw you,I felt happy and surprised!(past tense [掛] + 打錯字= =) I think you are the best!

I promise you I won't be naughty.Thank you! (好似唔關篇野事禾= =)

With best wishes,
Sally

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其實我唔知篇野講咩-.-, 覺得篇野好怪...
有題目會好d-.-

作者: Ruki 時間: 2009-6-18 03:04 PM 標題: 回覆 #15 lilypolly 的帖子

Thank you so much!

作者: lilypolly 時間: 2009-6-18 07:29 PM 標題: 回覆 #16 Ruki 的帖子

我唔知岩唔岩= =
我英文好低分-.-

作者: 燒魚 時間: 2009-6-18 11:55 PM

本人覺得lilypolly有d野改唔改都ok- -..

不過我唔識改喎-3-v

作者: peterkam 時間: 2009-6-19 01:38 AM

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