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發表於 2011-7-9 08:57 PM 資料文集短消息

我寫左篇文面試要交ga[招評語](認真mode)

  Make it happen
  Where do you want to go? What do you want to do? Do you have a dream waiting for someday?

  Its chance of happening is decided by you.

You can wonder and wish. If you think you can, you can. The most important point is you have these kind of thinking.

First,you need to set up a realistic dream and you need commitment and action. It means that you have to able to explain it how it can be turned from a dream to reality

Secondly , you should define your own ability, which is your skill , what you can do ,etc. Do you have some skills that are fit for making your dream comes true?

  Thirdly, plot the stategy . Think the path that you can make the dream comes true.

  Finally, just work hard.

  The dream is there, it's not a illusion. It's giving the permission to pull out all the stops.

  Surely, you need to define your cost and ability!

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發表於 2011-7-9 09:31 PM 資料文集短消息

呢篇文都OK

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發表於 2011-7-9 09:37 PM 資料文集短消息

其實寫得吾錯嫁啦; 但係有啲文法上面嘅問題;
1; want to代表[想]; 但係呢個表達方式比較中國人咁; 用would like to會好啲;
2; need to代表[需要]; 但係都係同一個問題啦; 其實用have to會好啲;
3; able應該係be able;
4; illusion係用an;
大概都差吾多啦; 改咗就正爆啦;)

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